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Okay so, firstly, great great great piece. Your right, you synthesised some many huge parts together into one cohesive hole. The daughter’s feelings about the YouTuber, the weight the YouTuber feels, the dynamic between the daughter and the father. The last bit about telling stories. There is so much to this that is fantastic! Great writing, great dialogue, great feeling.

But what I have to know, is, do you have a daughter? Like is this a non-fiction story? Because if it is, I’m not really sure why, but I assumed you didn’t have kids. And if you don’t have kids, and you made this whole story up, then that is equally impressive in the sheer imagination and creativity of it. Either way, bravo sir! Great piece. :)

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